外研版高中英语必修一《A new start》PPT课件(第5课时)，共57页。
Learning objectives
At the end of the lesson, you will be able to:
1. get the main idea and specific information of the sample journal entry;
2. find out the elements and layout of a journal entry;
3. write a journal entry about your first-week experiences at senior high;
4. revise your own and others’ writing.
Lead in
1. What was your impression of the first week at senior high?
2. Was there an enjoyable class? What happened during this class?
3. What about your after-school activities?
4. How did you make a new friend?
How to revise
1. Focus on organization
2. Focus on clarity
Remove repeated words, phrases, and ideas to make the paper more polished.
Using proper transition words between sentences and paragraphs.
3. Analyze the contents
Think about whether the writing is achieving the purpose of the piece.
Analyze the logic of your writing.
4.Proofread (校对) the writing, focusing on
Spelling, Grammar, and Punctuation.
Homework
Option 1. Revise your own journal entry according to the methods that you have learnt in this lesson.
Option 2. Read the writings of three other students and give some suggestions to them.
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